hugodc90
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Reged: 24/05/2007
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comments appreciated
normal size http://flickr.com/photos/hugomtb/2646201453/
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Zou
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Reged: 05/02/2007
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Hmm. It seems too long on the right (because the boat on the left is right by the edge of the frame. BUT I can't see any suitable place to crop, as the 'open' space on the right helps to make it feel less cluttered.
I absolutely love the range of tones you have in the image - just spot on imo. I wonder though if a 30 degree turn to the left would have made for more comfortable framing?
Out of interest, what side did you crop from?
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Zou
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Just checked your Flickr - a few faves added. 
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chris000
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I agree with Zou that there is a lot that is good about this picture, but the composition just doesn't work - the brighest part of the image is too close to the left hand side and as a result I think the picture is unbalanced.
The subject is interesting though, well worth another try if you can get back there
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The most beautiful thing under the Sun is being under the Sun - Christa Wolfe
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hugodc90
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was cropped from the left as there is a wall there which didn't really fit in
thanks for the advice
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